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The Lolly Junkie's Lament

Hormones jumping; blood a-pumping lips on the round, a lolly to hound a pulsing throb; I crave a knob with squishy cream, a junkie's dream A full-lipped lick should do the trick to ease my affliction, the lolly addiction I stamp my feet, grind my teeth beat my chest, both east and west The countdown begins; I'm sure to win a warrior cry; my fix is nigh drooling to suck I curse Lady Luck your lolly I picked but it's bone-dry licked DELYSIA JUST THAT ARCHAIC POET'S CONTEST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/26/2013 4:54:00 PM
Oh my Oh my, Licia, lol. I saw you online at last, hope you've ok, missed you being aound. Now about this poem, no lets not about this poem, coz of where me brains are at this moment, I'm being told all I need to know ha ha, and I thought I was naughty lol. Take care, Richard
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Date: 6/18/2011 8:33:00 PM
hormones a jumping , blood was a pumping , pressure was getting so high, inside i saw red , bed was a thumping, have to escape this poor old pig stye:) back piggies:) great verse babe, xo, Don
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Date: 6/13/2011 6:22:00 AM
SEE, HONESTY--U ARE SIMPLY SIMPLE, BUT PROVATIVELY SO! AND TALENTED 2 u CREEP!-i have yet to read tight jeans, but cannot wait CHECK YOUR SOUPMAIL PLEASE. u know, this poem radiates the smile i hope i'm able to put on your faCE NOW LET'S SEE one poem about weed, one using the term "junkie" and one to the best poet in the world...I GOTTA MEET ALL 3 OF THESE DUDES! as Bob Marley said, "ONE LOVE, LET'S GET TOGETHER AND FEEL All right"...U R 2 COOL..your mentor, ~free!~your comments are ubiquitous!
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:43:00 PM
wow delysia.. this is one stomping good poem luv.. thinking lollipop at first .. yummy ... far as my inspiration.. the contest names and themes get my creative juices flowing instantly and out come words.. I don't even blink just grab the copy book and pen quick luv.. has been that way from age 5 luv..
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Date: 6/12/2011 6:28:00 AM
AMazing images and a true fun write with many smiles... Glad you Liked "Morning Time" lol....always Michael
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Date: 6/11/2011 11:10:00 AM
Oooh, I like the naughtiness in this poem, Delysia. So many substance abusers can't "perform" and don't know what they're missing. Big seven for this one! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/10/2011 7:06:00 PM
a great piece finding some great poetry this evening, enjoying them all, and yours was right up there.
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:50:00 PM
We're on a fun kick here aren't we? You read mine and commented before I thought I had it posted. Actually I had pulled it back and was fixing the punctuation and I got a notice that it had a comment. I have always wondered if it stays there while we are pulling it back to work on it? Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/10/2011 5:56:00 PM
D.H., wow! i was "on the mark!! get set! ready!" and... i was amazed... a jumping pumping flow... really really.. all the way to the last lolly lick... super enjoyed,..p.d.
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