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The Laundromat

I enjoy watching Clothes tumble in the dryer At the laundromat; It reminds me of sunset And its swiftly changing hues.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/19/2012 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jim. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2012 1:02:00 PM
if i went there i would always love making clothes clean and pretending i am in a used book store
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Date: 11/2/2008 4:52:00 PM
I can tell you look at your surroundings carefully..This is great..BG
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Date: 8/2/2008 12:58:00 PM
different ways the cloths fall,as well as rythems.great poem
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Date: 7/30/2008 7:54:00 PM
Interesting - Great use of the form - Funny how we compare things in life sometimes - God Bless
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Date: 7/30/2008 9:34:00 AM
Jim, this Tanka is perfectly executed in format and flow. Great details and terrifically clear. Michael
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