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The Last Blast of Fire

Before the world became home to the life we now know an inferno of fire surrounded it The heat created life as the darkness was finally shattered Little do they realize how the begining came about No Adam and Ever here Just some atoms combining the storybook is itself half closed yet fortunately not completely forgotten

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2012 12:39:00 PM

Well said and written, Matthew - like it. Have a lovely afternoon. - oxox Anne-Lise :)- (IF ANY PRESSING THE BUTTON ..... Bye,bye.....)

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/10/2012 10:38:00 AM

yes i like this too, Matthew, told as it was...

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/10/2012 9:43:00 AM

Matthew; you have a great write here, educational too. People say that the world is coming to an end, but think it ends for those of us that die. Thanks for sharing. Lucy

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/8/2012 2:02:00 AM

I enjoyed this Matt. Great visuals. Mahalo

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Date: 10/7/2012 9:04:00 AM

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2012 9:03:00 AM

Hello, Matt... I am impressed with your poem. A true beginning , on how our life was mastered out of the fiery madness. I'm wondering how this story will end. However, you free-verse has been an honor reading on this wonderful day called my birthday,,,, xox~pd