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The Kids written warning

The Kid, he's got some balls!
Taking on the PD,
I see the PD has made some calls
old enemies but now PD is good to me.

This is a warning to the Billy the Goat gruff
Careful with my friend.
For now I am the Shepard, I'll make life rough.
See what happens if you do. It'll be the end.

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  1. Date: 4/18/2010 7:54:00 AM
    COMMENT from "Shepard?" on my The Real CRUSH - Awww! This is such a lovely love story for PD, Billy Goat! So when are you gonna do some slamming? Enough of this kissing and cuddling!!! PS, your far too vulnerable for me to take down! It would be like taking candy from a baby!!!!!

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 7:52:00 AM
    Let me tell you something about this "baby" shepard man. When the doctor smacked my butt when I was born, I beat the livin crap out him. Maybe I'll be more merciful with you and quickly pulverize you so you won't be in agony nursing your wounds. Slam ya later Shepard man ( which makes me think. What possible flock could you protect? You always run like a scared child from the smallest BOO!)

  1. Date: 4/17/2010 6:15:00 PM
    Still nursing my wounds Shepard man from my CRUSH with P D. Don't think that means you're not gonna get a slam tag from me. I'm not done with PD yet. That was PD's last CRUSH of me, BUT YOU? Oh I'm gonna slam and CRUSH you so easily. Watch your back. You'll Never See My Attack. Kidster

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 10:49:00 AM
    I am so pleased to have been able to read your poetry this morning Gareth. you all are a riot. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 7:05:00 AM
    Good one G.J. I did make him fold quick. Man And that is because I was going to strike better on the 2nd one . Thank you for the better comp. I did not think he had it in him anyways. Boy you sure did..P.D. was here. THANK YOU.

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 2:47:00 AM
    PD does have friends here, Billy, and so do you. Wish you hadn't thrown in the towel so quickly as I was enjoying the lighthearted exchanges between the two of you. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/16/2010 2:09:00 AM
    Put ya guns back in ya holster there Shepard. I'm not taking on PD. PD Is the slamming champion. I concede. Twas an honor getting slammed by the great PD, but slamming is a game I should only play occassionally. Did you see the lunatic I was in my slam to PD? That's not who I am, but when I wrote that slam, that's who I was excatly. Would hate to one day go back to that place in my head and find I'm stuck there permanantly. Anyways, good to see PD's got good friends like you.Best Wishes, Kidster