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The Impending Winter

The nights grow even colder when I realize I've spent too much time screaming at your shadows and waiting for a miracle

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Sharon Winter

Date: 10/11/2008 8:01:00 AM

Oooh. Time to move on for sure. Strong write here. Tracy, thanks so much for your thoughtful comments. Coming from you they mean so very much. Question about your contest - can we include the whole poem that inspired us at the bottom of our submission? I ask because it will be unknown, for the most part. I would just put a link instead, but I don't believe they work here except in the blog area. Thank you. Love, Shar

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 10/10/2008 6:06:00 AM

Its short and it just touches the heart. Seems like nothing more would have justified the angst. Loved this. Blessings, Chitra

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/10/2008 5:00:00 AM

Yup, I hear that. Seize the moment, inhale it for all it's worth! Stay warm, ;) Kristin