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The Ice King

It must have been a gelid night in January when an Ice Age warrior appeared in a very frightening dream; his strong voice so distraught startled me... I screamed by feeling his cold gaze that had a strange gleam. " Shivering boy, I am the Ice Age warrior...please hold this sticky ice cube before it turns into dripping liquid and I will suddenly die without a cry; follow me and learn how to survive through the next ice age...it's not YouTube where science fiction doesn't satisfy but leaves one with a mouth so dry." Entered in Skat-Oz's contest, " Ice King " Written by Andrew Crisci on 7/29/2013 "

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Date: 8/23/2013 11:10:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..This is uniquely creative..Sara
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Date: 8/19/2013 4:56:00 PM
Hi Andrew, a nice chilling write... congrats..Linda
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Date: 8/19/2013 2:16:00 PM
- It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Andrew! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/19/2013 2:02:00 PM
HELLO ANDREW ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/29/2013 1:01:00 PM
Andrew AHHHHHHHHH I sigh my favorite poet is still here wowing me in every way This is wonderful work . Best wishes in the contest! Laura :)
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