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The Huge Pot

The huge pot
Filled with summer's impatiens
Adorned by snowny white blossoms 
And delicate green leaves
Whipped by fall's hurricane

Gogyohka Form
Sponsor: Joann Grisetti
Contest:Gogyohka

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2012 5:56:00 PM

Sara, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/9/2012 3:10:00 PM

Enjoyed this rich flowing piece Sara, best winning wishes for the contest.."

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/9/2012 2:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Sara, I can imagine a pot of impatiens being taken by the hurricane xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/8/2012 11:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/7/2012 9:53:00 PM

This is beautiful. Many congrats for this win Sara.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 11/7/2012 5:26:00 PM

congratulations - hope you are well..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2012 4:16:00 PM

great way to use imagery, sweetie. Congrats on the win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2012 11:39:00 PM

wow, this is quite a beauty I somehow passed by yesterday. Really like this, Sara. Is your member area and soupmail gone right now like mine?

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 11/4/2012 9:03:00 PM

Sandy didn't mind stirring up that pot, Sara.:( I was looking at photos from all the devestation, however you have contained the essence in this verse. Heard you're not feeling well, though as always you take the time and energy to write and encourage others. Wishing you the best, keep well!! Love, Mikki

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 11/4/2012 2:21:00 PM

Sandy must have inspired you to write this one. Good work. Have a blessed day. Lucilla

Jack Horne

Date: 11/4/2012 1:14:00 PM

love this one, my friend - a sure winner

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/4/2012 7:43:00 AM

this form seems to fit your style quite well, sara...ohh, the ending is very beautiful... best wishes and winning huggs!..:)

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/4/2012 4:21:00 AM

The hurricane wiped away alot of beauty such as the one described. Loved the write.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/3/2012 8:32:00 PM

Sara, this poem has a magic i can't quite place....tho i feel it...jimbo

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/3/2012 4:55:00 PM

Did the flowers get a whole work over? I know we don't have any flowers that survived the freezes that we've had so the winds didn't phase the remains of those! Your write here is phenomenal my friend! I really enjoyed reading this wonderfully delightful poem this evening...you are getting good with these Googyoka poems Sara! What a exemplary piece, Great Work!!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/3/2012 4:35:00 PM

Oh Oh, Did you get the blast too Sara, I hear it was wicked and hope you weren't caught in it. I see the flowers did though. All the best in the contest. Love, Lizzie