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The Hill

When thoughts overwhelm me, I run to you where I can be free next to the sea under a forest canopy where nature surrounds I found you When I stumbled across you, many months ago, things were calm, collected, serene time stood still so did my mind things change I never thought you would your leaves have fallen, the air chilled your green gone dead the universe is strange in changing you when all I needed was consistency but even nature changes, I suppose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/21/2013 7:54:00 PM
Abbie, about your poem: life is like a hill... never know what to expect or how fast we run without stumbling... enjoyed...pd
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Date: 1/21/2013 7:31:00 PM
Abbie, stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here reading and enjoying new poets to love, appreciate and adore. (And make friends with:-) Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward to following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV *LINDA
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Date: 1/11/2013 5:23:00 PM
Welcome to soup, I enjoyed your write this evening. Light & Love
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Date: 1/10/2013 8:10:00 PM
second read, captured the story told,welcome to the soup, hope other offerings to come,good luck.
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Date: 1/10/2013 1:58:00 PM
Changes with every season. Good poem. I like - JH
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