The Heart of a Poet Speaks Part 5

Good day , I have been dormant for many years Maybe some of YOU can remember my words I spoke in my Host’s stead, through oceans of tears I come to YOU, singing ; Flutter with the birds Humming Hymns : a crescendo of “ Forever “ Barbara Jean Gorelick : my Hosts’ “FOREVER” I’m beating for her : the Gift of God : to Man I see the Light again : LOVE I Understand To be Continued Inspired By Dr. Ram Mehta For His POEM : "Life a flowing river - Rispetto " Dedicated to My LOVE " BARBARA JEAN GORELICK "

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Date: 12/25/2010 10:25:00 AM

Nice dedication. Glad Dr. Mehta inspired you. Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. Have a wonderful Christmas! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/23/2010 12:32:00 PM

Merry xmas HG..what a nice gift you have given to me..BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/23/2010 8:59:00 AM

Exquisite lines and perfect for the lady who so inspired u on this site HG my silent beau.. u have found treasures in each other... the true joy of tomorrow is loving one so dear today my friend.. enjoyed your passionate and romantic lines.. happy holidays with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/23/2010 5:18:00 AM

I am very happy that Life is a flowing river inspired to write this. enjoyed the piece. HG