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The Happiest Day

I have open my heart and free my mind I become one with us And one with time I have connected to life As it connected to me Oh my lord I turned 17 Yes a age Of happiness an joy R rated movies will be my toy Curfew is lifted As I am old This is just the beginning I am told Now this may seem silly Yes indeed But can you remember when you turned 17 Its a landmark An age of time All grown Well.. in a years time 2010 gave me this gift Wrapped it up with a kiss Now, now You may say “what?” “It been a whole year more things should have filled with you cheer.” But nothing such happened In this year combine I continued life, nothing to divine So the age of 17 Has occurred Now 2011 Should be much more fun The gift of 18 Has begun Oh I cant wait for this magnificent gift But for now I shall say October 24 was the happiest day! Note: October 24 was my Birthday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/13/2011 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations Taina on your win in Royal Trevino's contest "New Year". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2011 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations on nthis well deserved Hm in the contest of Royal, Taina
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Date: 1/9/2011 11:24:00 AM
Enjoy your youth and don't wish it away. Youth arrives and is gone Old age comes to stay. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 1/9/2011 10:13:00 AM
Congrats Taina on your HM in Royal's contest with this wonderful write and entry.. enjoy your special honor with luv..
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Date: 12/25/2010 4:54:00 PM
Believe it or not geting older doesn't necessarily make us wiser ;) Light & Love
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Date: 12/25/2010 2:02:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem Taina!Must be a winner in the contest.
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