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The Grief of Crows

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The Grief of Crows

Soaring above the bushfire's flames,
astounded crows, blacker than charred
tree trunks, flap spectral wings.

Numb with loss, no caws drone out.
Wind rushes in updrafts from
the smoky heat: to rise as a vengeful spirit,
to hammer at fleeing pinions,
to witness aimless circles above coal black trees,
now absent of rough stick nests.

Suzanne Delaney

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  1. Date: 4/26/2015 8:06:00 PM
    Hi Suz, stopping by for a second read.. I was also checking in to see if you are still in the soup. I see your poems. But you haven't been active. I do hope you return... HUGs.. LINDA

  1. Date: 4/5/2015 3:52:00 PM
    SUZ, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

    Delaney Avatar Suzanne Delaney
    Date: 4/14/2015 1:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Linda: So great to hear from you. I haven't been here these past few months. Time to return I think, Thanks for remembering me, Hugs, SuZ
  1. Date: 11/9/2013 9:22:00 AM
    Fantastic imagery. One can feel the grief in the line...'witness aimless circles....'

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 11:37:00 AM
    Well done, SuZ; great imagery.

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 9:52:00 AM
    Hi Suz - I wrote a lovely comment about your misplaced crows and it got lost in a computer glitch. How sensitive these last two poems. A muse on death and how universal it is - devastating- human and animal. When I see a hit-by-a car deer in the road, a sadness comes over me. I think of my daughter Jeannie's death somehow. Lonely. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 10:34:00 AM
    great work Suzanne.excellent. (: )Jenish.

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 3:59:00 PM
    The flight, the grief...damn. This hit hard. Excellent job!

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 5:58:00 AM
    Very touchy write, Suz

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 5:23:00 PM
    One can feel the plight of the crows, and the smoke in the eyes......well done!!

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 10:34:00 AM
    a dark captivating portrait of "death" in its many forms, suz... greeat work!...:) huggs