The Girl

She has wondered who she is 
Years have past and she has still wondered
One life but may pages turned
A script she has acted through and through 
Some shining some full of crying

A ticket paid for a journey taken
A moment of seduction in one way
Turning into a point of survial
Thoughts drive ones mind to hide
We all have a wild darkside 

Who is this girl who is she now 
A woman in mind a demon of kind
She is truth of an innocences
Her beauty is deep than deep
Her dreams are held in sleep

Just a girl I once knew
She is no longer here
Her time came and past 
Now she sits in the clouds
Watches us with pride
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 11/3/2010 8:56:00 AM
Smile ~ I love the way that "Your Beautiful Soul" seems to have reached so very deeply to present these last two poes this morn 'My Dear, Precious & Priceless Sarah Hales!!!'" ~ The most beautiful paintings are brushed upon the canvas from the palettes wonderous colours of oils to be found amid our souls wells of profound, treasures thus dipped; "Masterpieces; Just Like This!!!" ~ Again, "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John!:) ~
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Date: 11/3/2010 3:38:00 AM
what a poignant piece that leaves much to the imagination.. i like, sarah.. thanks! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/3/2010 3:01:00 AM
Enjoyed the read and the sharing of a memory, we all do have a dark side. Excellent piece.
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