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The Gift

"Gwanny" he trilled Jublant in his joy She braced herself Never knowing what his boy Would do next. Yet she heeded when he called "Come to the fwont porch." She went, her hands balled into fists as She crept outside to see What his gift was this time That caused him such glee. Just as she stepped out The little blued-eyed rake Pulled out his pocket A long green snake. "I bwought you a pwesent you can keep as a pet." We'll not say what happened next But the front porch was wet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/11/2013 7:13:00 AM
EJ., , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda
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Date: 8/9/2013 7:30:00 AM
LOL...Absolutely adorable.
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Date: 8/5/2013 7:07:00 AM
Hi E.J. - I came across this in my reading today. Now I won't go out to play. I love a surprise and you nailed it. Kathy
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Date: 9/25/2011 1:50:00 PM
This was Mark Twainish. Loved it. A short touching story in a few lines. Vince
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