The Garden Spider

Among the flowers of beauty bright,
Upon leaves of green I sight 
Graceful webs of intricate fashion 
Of labor and of passion. 
No architect so proud can craft this shroud; 
Its sticky vines of ensnaring gloom 
Tell little of an impending doom.  
Hidden fangs await the unwary,
The thirsty, the greedy; 
Entangled vivacity thrashes about 
With a dreadful shout. 
The spider’s banquet is short and rich 
As it savors every twitch. 
No prying eye will dare to spy
On death’s descending cry. 
At dusk it drops from a canopy sky 
To taste the spoils from its ravenous eyes.
Death wrangles a martyr, wraps it in twine
Then dangles it from a vine. 
Flowering sprouts enjoy the morn, 
Marveling at the horde of spiders born. 
A cloud of spiders take to flight 
On currents of air lassoed
Just right.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 2/4/2021 9:19:00 PM
A clever tribute. Well done. I enjoyed finding your poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology~
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Date: 7/12/2016 11:22:00 PM
Jonathan, Congratulations on your 101 in a ROW contest number 3 win, Luv SKAT
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Date: 7/11/2016 4:08:00 PM
Fantastic imagery in this! I'm not a fan of spiders, though. Congrats on your win, Jonathan!
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Date: 7/10/2016 1:47:00 PM
Wonderful poem and win. I am a spider watcher myself. They give endless inspiration for poems. Cheers, SuZ
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Date: 7/10/2016 9:22:00 AM
A perfect image and depiction of a Spiders life! Congratulations on the win!
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Date: 7/9/2016 1:18:00 PM
Congratulation my lovely friend on your top placement with this beautiful poem. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/9/2016 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations Jonathan, loved the visual intrigue you wove...
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Date: 7/9/2016 4:31:00 AM
Jonathan, , Congratulations on your win. Stop by my blog "The Garden Spider" if you like. Nice to have you join my contest. Luv Linda
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Date: 5/16/2014 7:00:00 AM
Way to go in the garden win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/15/2014 8:27:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful winning poem, Jonathan ! - Well deserved first place! - (I have not participated in the contest for a while - like writing whatever comes to my mind.) - Have a nice day. - Be proud of your write :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/15/2014 7:37:00 AM
Super visuals, Jonathan! Congratulations on your Awesome Win!
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Date: 5/15/2014 6:31:00 AM
Very nice..enjoyed. Think it might be a couplet or rhyme rather than a narrative. matters not! congrats. BG
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Date: 5/15/2014 6:15:00 AM
Fantastic take on the theme of the contest, congrats on the win, Jonathan
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Date: 5/15/2014 3:32:00 AM
great pen Jonathon congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/15/2014 2:03:00 AM
Jonathan, Congratulations on being the number one entry in PD contest. Verlena
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Date: 5/15/2014 1:53:00 AM
Jonathan, Congratulations, on your winning poem... Thank you for the lovely garden, every poem, was wonderful, and amazing. Take a trip, and enjoy my latest blog "Midnight Garden." If you'd like... Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/15/2014 1:44:00 AM
am not the biggest fan of spiders ////00\\\\ but this was a superb write and a well deserved winner. hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/13/2013 4:29:00 AM
Hi Jonathan, I can see why you like this, congratulations on your win love xx
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Date: 12/12/2013 8:05:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jonathan
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Date: 12/12/2013 1:59:00 PM
congrats on your deserving win!
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Date: 12/12/2013 12:15:00 PM
All the poetry submitted was heartfelt. From love throughout life to love in the depths of death with reflections of nature. You are all deserving First Place Winners and I thank you for entering your favorites in my contest.
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Date: 6/24/2013 8:00:00 PM
Good mix of creepy and beauty Jonathan, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/20/2013 6:54:00 PM
I really enjoyed these charming rhymes! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/20/2013 6:26:00 PM
Just right! Nice one and congrats. BG
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Date: 6/20/2013 4:32:00 PM
Jonathan congratulations on your fine win. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie
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