The Flight

above the treetops
gliding in the summer's wind
majestic eagle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/17/2013 9:17:00 PM
I see you do extremely well with haikus. I've written a few... None better than this.... Jake
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Date: 9/30/2013 7:59:00 AM
An embrace of the horizions, not allowing anything in life to hold the eagle down. Wonderful.
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Date: 9/30/2013 7:49:00 AM
Majestic Haiku ! Good choice of words. I love to write Haiku every so often-- not as easy as it looks though !
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Date: 9/30/2013 6:25:00 AM
What a fine use of imageries to create a picture, Sandra
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Date: 9/30/2013 4:48:00 AM
Brings a picture to mind with this descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/30/2013 4:41:00 AM
- I see the magnificent bird soar above the treetops - very nice haiku Sandra ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2013 4:33:00 AM
Hi Sandra, Lovely simple write that speaks much.. Ken
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Date: 9/29/2013 11:22:00 PM
Nice write. I like the mental image
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Date: 9/29/2013 4:25:00 PM
this would be an amazing sight to see and I bet it is a true one for you. I often make up my haiku just from what I learn by watching tv and stuff. Did you really see this sight one day?
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/29/2013 5:13:00 PM
I have watched them countless times... they are so graceful in flight...I have seen them swoop down into waters below and come away with fish and even a duck once...I have stopped my empty bus to snap pictures of them in trees and have them on my facehook.. :) love and hugs Sandy
Date: 9/29/2013 3:17:00 PM
captured perfectly Sandra love it Shadow x smile
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/29/2013 5:14:00 PM
thank you Shadow...just yesterday they flew over my friends house moments before I got there...her son shared the pics with me, though I have been lucky enough to see them countless times :) hugs
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