The Flames of Dawn

The flames of dawn peek over heartbreak hill
Leaving the embers of love scattered  across  the ground
The fire's warmth is replaced by a chill
The spark of love is nowhere to be found

Nothing  remains  to kindle my desire
Left with only the ashes of what used to be
No chance of rekindling the fire
That once blazed between you and me

A fiery sunset paints the sky with orange hues
Its glorious blaze now a flicker on the sea
Like our love it slowly sinks out of view
Its dying flame leaving me melancholy

But the flames of love will one day blaze anew
And rise to light the dawn of  a love that's true

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Date: 8/11/2013 5:29:00 PM
Lovely sonnet Joseph, pleased to see hoping rising at the end. Congratulations on your win. Take care, Richard
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Date: 8/9/2013 7:37:00 PM
ENJOYED......SKAT
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Date: 8/8/2013 9:42:00 PM
Joseph, enjoyed your late night poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) :-) :-) in Nathan's contest... Linda
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:28:00 PM
awesome nate
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Joseph May
Date: 8/9/2013 5:14:00 AM
thank you for my placement in your contest Nate
Date: 7/16/2013 11:34:00 PM
This is delightful and sweet, Joseph..a beautiful Sonnet! Congratulations on your win! Annalise
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Date: 7/15/2013 8:20:00 AM
Joseph congratulations on your excellent win. A fabulous Sonnet conveying much emotions of heartbreaker. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/14/2013 10:23:00 PM
Hi Joseph, congrats on your win. stopping by to say good night. LOVE *LINDA
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Date: 7/14/2013 10:05:00 PM
Joseph, Congratulations, with your awesome winning poem. ;-) Enjoy my latest blog if you like. Always loving and enjoying the soup ~ SKAT ~
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Joseph May
Date: 7/15/2013 7:01:00 AM
Thank you for my win in your contest Skat
Date: 7/2/2013 11:23:00 PM
Joseph. You wrote a very beautiful sonnet and I don't say that too often to sonnet writers. I just love the words you chose and the imagery.
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Date: 6/29/2013 7:06:00 PM
Joseph, intense emotions you've conveyed in this wonderful poem. An excellent description of heartbreak hill. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/28/2013 10:44:00 PM
it is lovely SKAT
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