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The First Time

Yes indeed I need to walk again with reality Yet keep the reflections I've gathered upon life's long way Sense once more locked away happiness that you gave this day Your touch upon my soul in truth your specialty. I walked amidst the mist the mystery of this my life Then you come along a seed in the warmth of dancing light With eyes of distinctive jade and freckles on a face bright Spreading the message of love's rebirth to a man in strife. That first time at that first touch you awakened my numb soul The lined eyes of wisdom the colour mirrored in mine own The next step now a certainty the seed from thence was sown Your happiness as cupids arrow to your heart my goal To walk with you in truth and from the mist to now emerge To build that rebirth is my aim your hearts abuse to purge © Collab between Mandy Tams and Harry J Horsman 14/04/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/16/2013 3:41:00 AM
A beautiful Collaboration: Mandy & Harry !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/16/2013 2:11:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it, Tfs
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Date: 4/15/2013 6:39:00 AM
This beautiful Mandy. It is so nice the way that the two of worked this out.Thanks for sharing and for pointing out my error.I do greatly appreciate it...... Lucilla
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Date: 4/15/2013 5:36:00 AM
Wonderful collab, Mandy :) Jag
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Date: 4/15/2013 4:35:00 AM
This is awesome, Mandy! Absolutely awesome! You two are quite a pair! Loved the last line most of all! More power to you both.
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Date: 4/14/2013 11:47:00 PM
Ths is so good Harry and Mandy, my IPad went into shock and shut down, excellent work ....Seren
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Date: 4/14/2013 6:01:00 PM
Great job, you guys. High goals. Sweet.
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Date: 4/14/2013 3:52:00 PM
happy to have written this with you Mandy, you are an amazing poet to work with...
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