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The First Glance

What if one look could change the life you’ve known? Would you finally see that were not meant to be alone? What if one touch could change everything you thought? Would you hold on tight, for better or not? What if a moment held all the potential of forever? Would you hold out for the endeavor? What if it took one look in his eyes, but you just knew? Would you go to this man that you were so irrevocable drawn to? What if his kiss was so warm it set your soul on fire? How far would you follow him, just to feel his desire? What if he was the only one who made you feel a new emotion? Would you move mountains, cross a desert, or even an ocean? What if just being next to him, made you melt? What would you do, to feel what I have felt? Sarah Comstock 3-17-11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/6/2016 1:05:00 AM
SARAH, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ** SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:08:00 AM
Sarah Comstock, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*
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Date: 3/29/2011 12:29:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Sarah. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol
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