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The fire that melted the ice

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The fire that melted the ice

Slowly through the skies,
With the hustling winds anew,
Tiny flakes fell with a white misty hue,
Falling through, 
Dancing along,
Swifting around,
Though many fell on the ground,
Some fell over me,
And few had shun my eyes, 
So as i sat across the bonfire,
And through this own fire,
Burning deep inside my soul,
My smile would always be there,
Waiting for her,
And just as the light of the sun would melt this snow flake,
She would adjust to my bitter cold mind

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  1. Date: 1/20/2013 5:34:00 PM
    Nice featured poem~SKAT

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 9:17:00 AM
    Thank you all!! You know everyone has to compromise with each other in one way or another!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 1:08:00 PM
    love the gripping poem~SKAT

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 2:12:00 PM
    One scary last line there [shiver] Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 2:57:00 PM
    "Fire that melted the ice resounds of experience. A rapid moving poem, for sure! Nice work. "waiting for her... not kidding. Thx, Jan