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The Fire and Ice

Always on the outside looking in Alone and lonely though surrounded by Never really letting anyone in No man could ever warm her heart That is till he walked in Blue eyes of ice met brown eyes of fire She saw a tornado there With arms of the wind to quiet the fire The volcano became aware True love is more than rare Two old souls had met on a dare Explosions have erupted And crushing winds have blown through But her love has only grew Something she never knew Once a free spirit Now bound by the wind She waits for her man To blow in again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/19/2011 2:18:00 AM
Susan, Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured this week. I'm thrilled to be back here on the soup. Now I have time to check on all of the featured poems of the week. Plus more.. Have yourself a great one,.. always ~p.d.
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Date: 8/17/2011 7:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured. I adored the ending in your last stanza.
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Date: 8/15/2011 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Susan. Love, Carol
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