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The Fiddler's Cat

An ebon sky, darkness to light Diamond stars, mosaic night Bright lunar sphere of brilliant white Floodlights a scene of will and might. The Fiddler’s Cat, sips warm Bordeaux Fiddle to chin, strong paw to bow Rosin to bow on amber ice Wide upward swing, long downward slice. A rotund dish, the restless spoon Race through the night below the moon. Ah, Fiddler’s cat empties Bordeaux Strikes violin strings, with Dante’s bow He plays of sorrow, he plays for chance As spirits soar, he plays to dance. He plays of peace, he plays for hope To love and trust, he plays the most. Fading ebon screen, pale ginger sky An exhausted shrug, a weary sigh. A new ordinance decreed by spoon and dish Keep catnip away when serving fish.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/13/2019 9:12:00 PM
Another awesome write Michelle. a wonderful tale!
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Date: 9/30/2017 4:42:00 PM
Wow I'm impressed!!! But we as good poets we know were good at what we do. You put what poetry requires, the right stuff.
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 11/7/2017 7:32:00 PM
Thank you, John. My "Pièce De Résistance" silly little kitty cat. Wishing good things to you, keep well!!!
Date: 6/29/2017 4:54:00 AM
I remember my ma screaming: Do not give sweets to the cat! The Tomcat was looking in my eyes so covetous, so I gave it orange juice, too. Now I understand his feeling. I am dead. I am dead to read you again and again.
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Date: 7/1/2016 12:57:00 PM
This be one crazy cat - sipping bordeaux and playing the fiddle. Nip will do strange things to kitties. Love, daver
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 7/2/2016 11:33:00 AM
I'm thinking of the kitties we'd had, at my childhood home there'd been catnip growing wild in a field near us. I would pick some, smell it, and wonder what they'd found so exciting about it.:(
Date: 5/27/2016 8:48:00 PM
You are SO dang good, Michelle!! Loved that ending!
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Date: 5/27/2016 8:48:00 PM
fave poet too!
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Date: 5/7/2016 7:34:00 PM
Well, it's official. I have to start following you. You're a very talented poet, and the things you write are so entertaining. =D
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Date: 1/21/2015 8:19:00 AM
A lovely slant on on Edward Lear's 'The Owl & The Pussycat. It worked well for me, except the Bordeaux, I love that more than I do cats! Lovely write, Thak you for sharing. God Bless .D
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Date: 1/18/2015 9:19:00 AM
I like this poem so much. It is very visual and I have cats which makes it special. It doesn't matter when the violin was invented, The cat always had one!
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Date: 12/19/2014 2:27:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this . Your words are colorful and invoke visualizations of a background
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Date: 12/19/2014 2:31:00 AM
Nice
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Date: 12/17/2014 11:42:00 AM
very nice....
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Date: 12/17/2014 7:36:00 AM
Congrat.I like the poem and especialy the middle verse "Race through the night below the moon." The conscience of man is a similar race much based on pulses and reflexes with possible self-reflecions, sometimes an inner law or moral trail till the final one. Some lives and characters are similar to cats,some other like dogs.Best regards,O.B
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Date: 12/17/2014 5:45:00 AM
It's a natural tale of a colourful feline. Nature has got a lot of potentialities. A very good poem. Kudos.
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Date: 12/16/2014 6:50:00 PM
Wonderful Poem Michelle. I like the rhyming :) :) :)
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Date: 12/16/2014 6:42:00 PM
Lovely.
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Date: 12/16/2014 6:36:00 PM
fantastic poem flows really well and I love the great rhyming
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Date: 12/16/2014 5:21:00 PM
What a marvellous experiance. It is one of the best couplets I have ever read. And what a great take on a childhood classic. Totally impressed. I just hope that i may be able to write in this calibre one day. I am still giggling! I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry over the next few days.
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 12/19/2014 1:43:00 PM
Oh, I read your writes, you are above and surpass me! I'm not sure which rhyme you might choose, but please tell me when you do! Some of them really could use a facelift. :)
Date: 12/16/2014 5:18:00 PM
Michelle, I once saw "Fiddler on the Roof" in New York. Your poem is delightful read, putting me in touch with picturesque night. Truly you're master poetess. Happy Holidays, God bless ...irisrose...
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Date: 12/16/2014 3:59:00 PM
A well crafted poem. I read it a couple times. Content and rhyme work well together in it. It is an entertaining take on the old nursery rhyme. Booze, fish, and catnip might be an intense combination for a cat, but if his adventures read this well why not?
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 12/19/2014 2:43:00 PM
I was going to comment on your poetry, instead I'll share some Lewis Carroll? "If seven maids with seven mops Swept it for half a year, Do you suppose," the Walrus said, "That they could get it clear?" "I doubt it," said the Carpenter, And shed a bitter tear. Might need the cat to cheer him up? Merry Christmas! Mikki
Date: 12/16/2014 3:11:00 PM
Michelle, Another most wonderful couplet here. The verses flow so very well and the imagery is quite exquisite indeed. Enjoyed this one immensely. Another "7" and a FAV from me. I invite you too, to drop by read my poetry as well anytime you wish. Best Always!! Gary
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Date: 12/16/2014 1:23:00 PM
A little scat from the fiddler's cat can get you through the night. A sip, a draw, a swig, pa-shah. If kitty is a mean drunk, keep your distance from it's claw. Fun little write Michelle. Wishing you a very nice holiday season. Peace. :)
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Date: 12/16/2014 10:46:00 AM
VERY NICE
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Date: 12/16/2014 9:20:00 AM
Nice light-hearted little poem with some interesting imagery. You could do with less commas.
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Date: 12/16/2014 9:02:00 AM
Excellent poem adorned with diamond words conjured a nice magic where whole picture is beautifully screened. Genius only and simply. Loved always, my poet friend,bl
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