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The Feel of Dawn

You run with the breeze
naked spirit oh so free,
joyous tide of life
your smile I catch in the wind
with every single sunrise.

© Harry J Horsman 2013

Copyright © Harry Horsman | Year Posted 2013

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Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 8/21/2013 11:51:00 PM I sure am glad I read this after reading "the Face of Dawn"-- this is truly beautiful as well, loving how this one is so descriptive and alive- I could picture this perfectly. This was such a pleasure to read, and smiles on my face... Login to Reply

Rachel W Date: 8/20/2013 8:23:00 AM This one reminded me to be thankful for each new day-- a fresh start. Thank-you for that. Login to Reply

Roberthenry Poulin Date: 8/18/2013 1:42:00 PM You run with the breeze tanka with the lines 4 and 5 are heartfelt romantic. I like it. I like it a lot. Wonderful. Robert Henry Poulin Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/24/2013 12:05:00 AM returning to this gorgeous poem to say, missing you! Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/23/2013 1:57:00 PM This definitely goes to my favourites.It tickles my romantic side..soo beautiful Login to Reply

Ajayi Angel-Simon Date: 7/21/2013 2:48:00 PM Reminds me of D.H Lawrence's freedom. Man can't be more free for expression. Love your comparison because it checks the type of freedom to be expressed by man. Love the motif of freedom. Greatly penned Harry. Love. Angel Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/20/2013 2:01:00 PM Nothing like catching a naked runner before the sun rises. By the end of the week you must be exhausted. Login to Reply

Yanny Widjanarko Date: 7/17/2013 9:16:00 AM Lovely Harry! I love two last line they are gorgeous :D wishing you a wonderful day there :) hug, Yanny Login to Reply

Dan Kearley Date: 7/15/2013 10:01:00 PM Beauteous! Words of the heart. Login to Reply

Vassilis Comporozos Date: 7/14/2013 1:23:00 PM Beautiful images, tender tanka Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/14/2013 10:27:00 AM What a beautiful tanka...Just beautiful Harry Login to Reply

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 7/13/2013 5:45:00 PM Harry this is a fabulous tanka. I love the second line. You've created a care-free dawn. Warm Smiles, Connie Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 7/12/2013 2:28:00 PM I can feel the cool touch of dawn with this wonderful poem! Harry! jimbo Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/12/2013 12:32:00 PM you bring me directly into the beauty of dawn's moment.. what a fine work, harry..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 7/11/2013 8:30:00 AM Again an excellent beauty feeling adorned with beautiful words. A nice creation. Loved always, my sweet friend, bl Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 7/11/2013 3:39:00 AM Ahh me Harry...What a beauty this is!...You have captured the very essence of morning here...'naked spirit oh so free'...'your smile I catch in the wind'...WOW Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 7/10/2013 7:58:00 PM Who could not smile upon reading this one!?? Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/10/2013 3:17:00 PM Harry, I like this second one even better. One of your very best tanka poems. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/10/2013 12:52:00 PM Great one to express morn's good feelings or one to describe a person maybe..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Your presence at my work was encouraging..Sara...I am glad that you chose mine to read..Sara Login to Reply

Terry O'Leary Date: 7/10/2013 12:44:00 PM Another great one, Harry... keep it up... Terry Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 7/10/2013 12:31:00 PM Yes enjoy every day.....we learn this more the older we get..anyway I sure do...great words Harry....thanks Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 7/10/2013 11:51:00 AM This is very beautiful Harry. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/10/2013 10:56:00 AM - Harry, each line gives me a pleasure - Thank you. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 7/10/2013 9:17:00 AM a write that puts a smile on my face, a good write, enjoyed this one, LUV SKAT Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 7/10/2013 5:27:00 AM Hi Harry....You're at it again! Making magic....loved this. :) Hugs Login to Reply

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