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The Feel of Dawn

You run with the breeze naked spirit oh so free, joyous tide of life your smile I catch in the wind with every single sunrise. © Harry J Horsman 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 8/21/2013 11:51:00 PM
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I sure am glad I read this after reading "the Face of Dawn"-- this is truly beautiful as well, loving how this one is so descriptive and alive- I could picture this perfectly. This was such a pleasure to read, and smiles on my face...
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Rachel W
Date: 8/20/2013 8:23:00 AM
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This one reminded me to be thankful for each new day-- a fresh start. Thank-you for that.
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Roberthenry Poulin
Date: 8/18/2013 1:42:00 PM
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You run with the breeze tanka with the lines 4 and 5 are heartfelt romantic. I like it. I like it a lot. Wonderful. Robert Henry Poulin
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/24/2013 12:05:00 AM
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returning to this gorgeous poem to say, missing you!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/23/2013 1:57:00 PM
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This definitely goes to my favourites.It tickles my romantic side..soo beautiful
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Ajayi Angel-Simon
Date: 7/21/2013 2:48:00 PM
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Reminds me of D.H Lawrence's freedom. Man can't be more free for expression. Love your comparison because it checks the type of freedom to be expressed by man. Love the motif of freedom. Greatly penned Harry. Love. Angel
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/20/2013 2:01:00 PM
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Nothing like catching a naked runner before the sun rises. By the end of the week you must be exhausted.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 7/17/2013 9:16:00 AM
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Lovely Harry! I love two last line they are gorgeous :D wishing you a wonderful day there :) hug, Yanny
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Dan Kearley
Date: 7/15/2013 10:01:00 PM
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Beauteous! Words of the heart.
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Vassilis Comporozos
Date: 7/14/2013 1:23:00 PM
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Beautiful images, tender tanka
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/14/2013 10:27:00 AM
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What a beautiful tanka...Just beautiful Harry
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 7/13/2013 5:45:00 PM
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Harry this is a fabulous tanka. I love the second line. You've created a care-free dawn. Warm Smiles, Connie
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/12/2013 2:28:00 PM
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I can feel the cool touch of dawn with this wonderful poem! Harry! jimbo
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 7/12/2013 12:32:00 PM
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you bring me directly into the beauty of dawn's moment.. what a fine work, harry..:) huggs!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/11/2013 8:30:00 AM
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Again an excellent beauty feeling adorned with beautiful words. A nice creation. Loved always, my sweet friend, bl
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 7/11/2013 3:39:00 AM
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Ahh me Harry...What a beauty this is!...You have captured the very essence of morning here...'naked spirit oh so free'...'your smile I catch in the wind'...WOW
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Carrie Richards
Date: 7/10/2013 7:58:00 PM
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Who could not smile upon reading this one!??
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/10/2013 3:17:00 PM
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Harry, I like this second one even better. One of your very best tanka poems. Luv, Andrea
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/10/2013 12:52:00 PM
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Great one to express morn's good feelings or one to describe a person maybe..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Your presence at my work was encouraging..Sara...I am glad that you chose mine to read..Sara
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 7/10/2013 12:44:00 PM
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Another great one, Harry... keep it up... Terry
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Donna Jones
Date: 7/10/2013 12:31:00 PM
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Yes enjoy every day.....we learn this more the older we get..anyway I sure do...great words Harry....thanks
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 7/10/2013 11:51:00 AM
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This is very beautiful Harry. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/10/2013 10:56:00 AM
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- Harry, each line gives me a pleasure - Thank you. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Skat A
Date: 7/10/2013 9:17:00 AM
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a write that puts a smile on my face, a good write, enjoyed this one, LUV SKAT
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/10/2013 5:27:00 AM
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Hi Harry....You're at it again! Making magic....loved this. :) Hugs
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