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The Feel

Written March 11, 2013

Slide like a snake through the weather vane
Squirm like a worm through your weathered veins
How it makes me feel
How it makes me feel
All the s*** I'll steal

Drink from the heart of an amulet
Drown in the wonders of percocet
You make me act the way I do
You turn me outside in from me to you
What you make me do

Sink in the pit of a past regret
So do you like the bitter taste yet
How I'll follow suit
In high speed pursuits
With a hundred proof

Gone is Ravi and the ways of the days
When sex came before foreplay
How it made me feel
To hear the sound so loud and the kids so proud
To relive those days

This bird has flown
This rubber soul won't heal
How it made me feel.
How it made me feel.
How it made me feel.

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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 10:56:00 AM
    sad but great whoever u may be