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the fawn

you disturbed the wild geese as your truck rushed out of the drive way my heart panted as I noticed the peeling logo on the side of the truck there were old ripped decals and expired fishing permits my eyes turned red piercing the glimmering headlights I never even noticed how
close you were to my white tail 
reflecting underneath my brown coat I read the logo while raising my
head from the soiled stain road it read bait and
tackle pink salmon reels hunting
season on brown bucks with white

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  1. Date: 1/19/2012 7:54:00 AM
    Somehow, I didn't imagine the fawn having such polite thoughts. ;-) Nice one :-)

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 5:44:00 AM
    wonderful personification. Enjoyed your poem, you have a unique style, very nice. hugs, catie :)