The Embrace of This Child

There is no hint, that this child of three
Could comprehend..
With his unknowing, smiling face,
With a cowlick in his hair, freckles here and there 
Who takes the air from my lungs, at a glance
Skin glistening, pink and rosy from the sun,
As he comes bounding through the door,
Mud on small shoes and face
Not an inkling or a trace..
Of any clue of the pace 
How my heart beats,... how it swells
The way my love wraps around 
His small body so tightly, that he would gasp.
This adoration that I feel....

    But of course, I don't squeeze tightly.
      I must hold my love for him
        With more restraint,
          Keep my arms encircled in a more gentle embrace,
             For he wouldn't understand how much love
                His sweet presence stirs up the air I breathe
                   This child, this precious son of my daughter
                      Will never know the joy
                          He has brought into my life






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Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 2/3/2013 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot Carrie luv xx
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Date: 2/2/2013 9:07:00 AM
They never realize that...how sweet and loving it is to hold them grands and watch them play. Love it !! Congrats on a well deserved win !!
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Date: 2/1/2013 9:37:00 PM
WOW, fantastic, and I would not expect less from you. Congrats on the win, CArrie. I can really feel your love for that baby in this one.
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Date: 2/1/2013 7:23:00 PM
CarrieCongratulations on a job well done. Enjoyed the cute and beautiful baby poems. I hope you do not mind that I embraced the amusement of this contest with my 13 year old son. Always and forever ~ LINDA
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Date: 4/8/2011 4:26:00 AM
Carrie, this stirred up my emotions until they over-flowed and ran down my cheeks. So moving and going straight to my favorite list. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/7/2011 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your honored success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/6/2011 5:20:00 PM
Oh how he will be embaressed LOL when Grandma reads this outloud at Christmas! So nice to have a write like this to revisit that joy! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 4/6/2011 4:18:00 PM
What a lovely Grandmother you are to that precious gift from God. And, you are a precious gift to him, as well! Congrats on your win! I'm puttin' this in my faves. I have a few more years before grandchildren, but this is a beauty worth saving! Ellen
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Date: 4/6/2011 11:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2011 10:04:00 AM
beautiful, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 4/6/2011 8:30:00 AM
Your love for your grandson is described in such a delightful way, Carrie. Congratulations on your success in Drake's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/6/2011 7:37:00 AM
Such a beautiful dedication to your grandchild. He is really very lucky to have you as a grandmama. Many heartiest congrats for this super win.
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Date: 4/6/2011 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Drake, Carrie
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Date: 4/6/2011 5:07:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your HM in Drake's cool contest with this vibrant write and elegant entry so special.. enjoy your very special honor with luv..
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Date: 4/6/2011 5:06:00 AM
Carrie, a beautiful & touching piece. :)
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Date: 6/25/2010 11:10:00 AM
This is just the sweetest poem, Carrie :) I could definitely feel the love that you have for your grandson and I really loved the formatting of your poem too--something like being swept away in that embrace! Very nice & congrats on your win with this--btw thank you so much for all your comments in my poems, and especially about my poem about my brother--your words touched my heart--thank you :) --nikko
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Date: 6/18/2010 4:31:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhh I love it!!! And they won't know until they have their own child! Light & Love
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Date: 6/16/2010 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John Heck's contest "A Warm Embrace" Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2010 11:35:00 PM
So much love here it oozes out. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/13/2010 8:03:00 PM
Congrats on the 4th place win
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Date: 6/13/2010 8:52:00 AM
Brilliant and heartfelt, congrats!
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Date: 6/12/2010 6:12:00 PM
Congrats on 4th win, Carrie
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Date: 6/12/2010 4:37:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in the Warm Embrace contest with this wonderful write .. a truly beautiful win to enjoy for a lovely write.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/16/2009 3:06:00 AM
Congrats on your succes in Debbie's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/15/2009 8:06:00 PM
This is so loving. It is amazing how we grandmas cherish our grandchildren. Hannah is my great-grandchild. Her beautiful mother is my granddaughter and thank you for your comments and congratulations to you also. Love, Joyce
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