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The Egg Beater

I treated you well, so it’s stumped me A fat little white dude has dumped me! For revenge I might bake Your insides in a cake. Better run for your life, Humpty Dumpty! No sunny side up for you, Guy! Forget about cake; you shall fry. Your whites and your yolk I will scramble. No joke! Tonight, Rotten Egg, you shall die. An oldie for Brian Strand's the 'ALL YOURS (MAY 20)' Poetry Contest

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Kim Merryman

Date: 5/22/2021 5:33:00 PM

Andrea, I love this! It is so fun! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Carol Mitra

Date: 5/20/2021 9:39:00 PM

Ha ha you solved a mystery for me today....Congrats on your top win Andrea...much love do take care :)

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 5/20/2021 5:21:00 AM

No surprise if The Egg Beater of this calibre comes atop as the top sitter, congrats

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/20/2021 3:38:00 AM

Congrats Andrea.. So cute. God bless you... hope I never make you mad :) Love, Gina

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/20/2021 12:41:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea. This limerick made me giggle...More to come!

Ivo Cos

Date: 5/16/2014 8:20:00 PM

Page 5 again! (I hope you don't mind! If it's not ok that I read page 5 Poems, would you let me know?) This one is a Highly entertaining Limerick! --- yes I'm dating Sherry!! -- Wymark's Room: He was attempting to move out to a New apartment. He lived there 7 years and had 8 more hours before moving once and for all

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 9/11/2013 6:42:00 AM

What a hilarious Limerick. Love it.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/30/2013 9:42:00 PM

Andrea, wow! I can't believe I forgot to thank you for the nice and silly poem you entered in my contest. A late late late CONGRATULATIONS. Thank you for the smirks and smiles your poem gave me while reading it. Hope you can forgive me, it is not like me to stoop low and diss all who support me or my contest. Even if I get no response, everyone still matters, and I try my best... Love love LINDA...

Roy Jerden

Date: 5/25/2013 5:44:00 PM

He may argue, plead and harangue/ But for scorning he'll certainly hang/ For his presumptous slights/ She's beaten his whites/ And toasted them in a meringue

Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 9/11/2013 6:41:00 AM

Love this comment

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/25/2013 1:29:00 PM

Lol, a smile it did put on my face. Andrea a nice entry for this silly poem contest. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Len Gasun

Date: 5/23/2013 8:09:00 PM

Big heartfelt congrats on your fabulous win my very dear friend Andrea! This is really great and funny! I love your egg joke and cake as well! I know you can bake well. May I have some please? ;))) Thanks for sharing and the smiles! love and hugs, Leonora

Abdul Malik

Date: 5/23/2013 3:30:00 PM

This's seriously a silly poem!

Ray Dillard

Date: 5/23/2013 11:26:00 AM

This was an Extra Large AA, Andrea! They don't come better than that. Congratulations, RAY

Red Omara

Date: 5/22/2013 10:36:00 PM

You're a very humorous lady. And you can cook as well? - Red

Joseph May

Date: 5/22/2013 7:16:00 PM

ha ha ....congrats on your win Andrea...

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/8/2012 8:50:00 AM

Oh congrats i see it was a winner, deservingly too

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/8/2012 8:48:00 AM

a joy to read this funny poem, such versatility, ha, love this.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/28/2012 8:14:00 PM

Oh wow, I LOVE it Andrea! What a scream! (Just Yolk-ing though) Can't stop laughing please help me would ya? I just tried to make some egg salad today so everyone could have a nice little sandwich and whoa buddy! Much muttering and swearing going on I'm afraid

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2012 11:43:00 AM

((()))Congrats on your winning work...Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/19/2012 7:15:00 AM

Another smile from you! Congrats on your win..BG

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 6/19/2012 3:22:00 AM

It's clever how you've used the phrase 'Rotten Egg' to convey the meaning of the whole poem. Revenge is sweet, huh, especially when it can be eaten! Congtrats on your win Andrea!