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The Dull Green Light

Amongst the bark of trees there shines a light a light not bright yet still illuminates the night dull, green and spherical it floats within the forest it appears to gloat it's maniacal grin spreads and causes unrest but yet brings comfort to souls lost The green gradually fades and a new shade is seen the shade of red. It's shape contorts and twists becomes enraged and unreliable the light is not definable by human nor god it rises and sits aloft the trees as if it is defining itself a greater being a power unseen the light pulses, jolts and flashes suddenly implodes and turns to ashes The dull green light never was and never will be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/12/2012 8:10:00 AM
Hi nice one you have (soup mail)
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Date: 6/12/2012 7:44:00 AM
nice write Daniel,enjoyed
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Date: 6/12/2012 7:20:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Daniel, hope you will have fun with poetry and write, read and comments a lot of poems with us. - You write very well, like your poem Daniel. - Have a lovely week. Hello from Norway and me Anne-Lise :)
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