Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

The Dreamer

karen feist Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled The Dreamer which was written by poet karen feist. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by karen feist

Best Karen Feist Poems

+ Fav Poet

The Dreamer

Once upon a time
In a backyard with a vine
A lady pretended to find
A lamp with a genie inside.

She rubbed it until it shined
Again and again with twine
Two puffs of smoke in a line
Poured out of it in her mind.

She thought of the wishes 
Soon coming her way
Her heart beating faster
"Imagine," she'd say.

That genies existed
And wishes came true
In everyone's yard
For me and for you!

Just then he appeared
As big as she thought
Her eyes blinked three times
The image was caught!

The lamp disappeared
Near the leg of his pant
Her wish had been granted
And she woke up from her nap.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 4/20/2009 12:46:00 AM
    Read like a fantasy, nice work...Raul

  1. Date: 10/2/2008 2:59:00 PM
    LOL, fantastic, I feel like a big kid again. Blessed be. Bellantony

  1. Date: 8/10/2008 10:12:00 PM
    I enjoyed this poem. You rhymed it very well and the content was lovely. kristina,15