The Dream

In lonely, pleasant quietude
I walked along the way.
No one to break my solitude
So early in the day.
I watched with fascination
The first bright, rosy glow
Suffuse the springtime, morning sky
In this my private show.
It was as though I walked on clouds
So beautiful the scene.
I broke into a lively run
As if just seventeen.

I awakened as the nurse arrived
To give me meds for pain.
It's two days since I lost my legs.
I'll never walk again.

Entered in Dream contest
Written  10/12/10





My husband lost both of his legs to  amputation from a disease that killed him just 8 months later.  I never saw him smile again.  He was unable to turn over in bed without help and I can only hope he was able to walk in his dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 5/11/2013 5:35:00 PM
Oh Joyce I'm so sorry for your loss. Life isn't fair. He probably did have a dream like you wrote. He was your muse on this one I think. Comgratulations on your win. Bless you. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 10/8/2012 8:53:00 PM
Such a sad story, but so well written Joyce. Thank you for sharing this touching story. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 10/8/2012 2:14:00 PM
So sad a fearfull memory,yes he is whole again now and in your dreams too! BIG hugs Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/8/2012 11:57:00 AM
So truly touching and sad... sorry for your loss and his. But you wrote it sooo beautifully. I won't forget this one. I'm sure it'll keep me company for years.
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Date: 10/8/2012 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "In Dreams" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/8/2012 9:08:00 AM
A locely dream for a sad reality. So manyof our vets wake up to this same nightmare. Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Date: 10/8/2012 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's dream contest.
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Date: 10/8/2012 5:19:00 AM
joyce - this is an amazing poem - very powerful and with such an unexpected ending. reading your note at the end made it even more poignant. congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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Date: 10/8/2012 5:18:00 AM
CONGRATS JOYCE ON A PHENOMENAL WRITE AND WORTHY FIRST PLACE WIN WITH THIS DRAMATIC DREAM SO SAD LUV ..
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Date: 10/8/2012 2:57:00 AM
How sad for both of you Joyce. You captured the sadness with beauty and honor in this lovely winning poem. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win,
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Date: 10/7/2012 9:06:00 PM
Joyce, a wonderful win in Francine Roberts, "In dream" contest. Enjoyed all her winners, love PD
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Date: 10/7/2012 5:08:00 PM
Intriguing and very touching,Joyce.Sorry for your loss.Great write..Congratulations on your well deserved win.....Love O.A
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Date: 10/7/2012 1:03:00 PM
congrats Joyce on your first place win in the contest, this was such a touching piece and exactly the kind of thing I was looking for in my contest
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Date: 10/7/2012 12:32:00 PM
congrats on ur well deserved win....:))))
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Date: 10/7/2012 12:03:00 PM
congratulations on your big win friend Joyce...cheers to the winner!!!! (^_^)
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Date: 9/20/2012 2:46:00 AM
a very touching poem...i believe only after we endure such heart wrenching moments can we put life into words.....such times help us to grow in real sense....xox...:)
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Date: 9/20/2012 12:49:00 AM
It makes us realize that we can't take anythg for granted and just live every moment .Very touching write and I hope yor hubby smiles again:)God bless
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Date: 9/19/2012 9:29:00 PM
This is such a sad sad write, but so very beautifully crafted, I'm in awe of its splendor, the vast greatness of this poem is astounding! I am in total delight of reading this exceptional poem this evening! What a powerful and ingenious piece, Great Work!!
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