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The Dove Tree

A flock of Christmas doves carried a turquoise veil through a white winter sky and found a willow tree weeping and alone in the cold of a December day The veil was pinned in the sky and twenty five doves alit in the bare branches so the tree was no longer alone as it listened to the song of the doves in the chilled morning air..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/10/2009 4:10:00 AM
holy cow Valerie! this is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever seen! fav, fav, fav!!! thanks for reading my poems too! and sending me to this exceptional poem!!! Happy Holidays to you and yours! james marshall goff
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Date: 12/29/2008 8:21:00 AM
This is amazing and how beautiful a site to behold as the doves take their way to this lonely tree. The words flow so easily and the detail is terrific. Michael
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Date: 12/29/2008 7:42:00 AM
Wow, this is magnificent. The doves with the blue veil - amazing! As for your comments on my bi-polar poem, my husband has this as well, and boy can I relate to those mood swings well, as it is always hard to watch one you love so torn apart and tortured. bless you for sharing, love, Kristin
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Date: 12/29/2008 7:18:00 AM
Wonderful imagery and language so well expressed... well done Valerie! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/29/2008 6:41:00 AM
Valerie, this is too lovely. A beautiful visual that inspires deeply. All the best to you in the new year. love, Shar
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Date: 12/28/2008 9:16:00 AM
This one sings, Valerie!! So beautiful the scene! ~ Love, Carrie
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