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the dove

the dove feeds beneath the birdfeeder 'pon seeds spilled ... all gone looks upward all other birds rake more seed out onto the ground.. never look around a feeding frenzie after the long cloudy days... many are nesting

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  1. Date: 5/7/2013 8:03:00 AM
    Avery nice haiku series. The, of course, there is the watchful cat waiting nearby... Jack

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 5:08:00 AM
    - A proficient haiku Sara, really good! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 6:27:00 PM
    you are so good at this form. lovely observations.

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 1:36:00 PM
    Very visual write! :) I love how nature means so much to you, Sara. The heavens declare.... ;) All nature sings and round me rings, the music of the spheres! This is my Father's World! :) You've done well, my dear. Thanks for the visits.

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 11:40:00 AM
    We are having a set of cloudy days here, I'm sure the birds wish it would be sunny I do! But I do enjoy the rain as well so I can't complain too much! This is an awesome set of Haiku, I like how you progressed from one Haiku to the next, done very well! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this afternoon, such a creative piece, Great Work!!