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The Dating Game Revisited

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The Dating Game Revisited

I told her at work I been bizzy
She got mad and threw a big hizzy
So I been in a bit of a tizzy
Tryin to fix things with Lizzy

So I say I’ll come see her again
(How many weeks has THAT been?)
If I knock on her door in chagrin
I’ll take a left hook to the chin

My God, you’re a silly damn fool!
Nothin’s changed, it’s still the same rule
So re-learn it, you stubborn old mule!
And haul yer ass back into school…

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  1. Date: 7/23/2013 8:45:00 PM
    ha ha Tim, i don't think you need to go back to school.. you live and learn. and being a bachelor is not that bad... perfect, you will.... make, good night... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 10:47:00 AM
    LOL! It was fun reading this. Thanks for stopping with your comments on my poem.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 10:22:00 AM
    This is very cute..... The age old game.ha ha. Love it. SuZ

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 8:25:00 AM
    This was charming as hell! Nice damn job! Avoid the left hooks at all costs. =)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 7:59:00 AM
    HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!! Oh TIM....this ROCKS! Tell Lizzy to just be charmed by your good looks and get out of her tizzy.... :) BTW...Just wanted to thank you for your wonderful remarks on my Girl Rising poem on FGM...I've answered all your posts! :) You are an amazing man! Hugs!

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 7:44:00 AM
    A good little funny, Tim. Nice to see you reviving it!

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 8:46:00 PM
    Haha! You made me smile :) I love this, it's modern problems into a classic verse. You have a way with words that very unique.