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The Dance

In a world of coldest rain I dance
and forgive every circumstance
that brings me pain or confusion.
Sometimes life's an illusion.

But hold on now,the music shines
into my darkest,earth-dug mines
and singing loudly as I can
I feel this is where it began.

My heart may skip a beat or two.
The mind at times without a clue
will lead me where I cannot be
so strong in stride or even free.

Two masks I wear and never know
just when I'll soar or dip down low.
Still,I will dance on without fear.
I'll find my bliss is waiting here.

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  1. Date: 3/12/2012 4:26:00 AM
    it looks like this is for my contest, deb??.. if ever , kindly put your name and contest name so i'll know.. thanks and huggs! :)

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 8:02:00 AM
    I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry Deb. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 5:43:00 AM
    such is the drama of life's dance, deb.. a powerful write filled with fluid exoressions... a dleight to read you today!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 3:37:00 PM
    Wow a great poem. I like the last line of the first verse. Life is indeed an illusion. Your poem hit home. we all wear two mask at times. Thanks for sharing your gift with us and thank-you for reading my work. Take care and bless you, Jancarl

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 6:43:00 AM
    Wow . . . A serious, powerful and strong poem written Deb. Admire it! - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 6:11:00 PM
    Bliss waits within...sway to life. Excellent job, Deb! =)