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The Damsel and the Dragon

fly away a dragon and a damsel meet at the pond

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/2/2012 3:17:00 PM
Nice haiku; it leaves much to the imagination. The thing I have trouble with is whether the person or creature being addressed is flying toward or away from the pond. What it is makes a big difference; (bigger or smaller than the dragon if it is malicious). Very imaginative! Perhaps a form with more word space would make an amazing poem.
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Date: 5/3/2012 11:43:00 AM
Good one Ann!Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 5/2/2012 4:16:00 PM
an interesting haiku/good for you
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Date: 5/2/2012 3:18:00 PM
Hope that dragon was an enchanted prince. Love it. Love, daver
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Date: 5/2/2012 2:32:00 PM
:) .... good ! - oxox Anne-Lise
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