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The Critic

I’m leader of a Bluegrass Band A tough critic watches each show She’s always out there listening Hears goofs that others never know No reviews in the Newspaper But after the show, when I’m home My wife always gives her review Caught it all, like a fine tooth comb She’s heard all of the songs practiced And knows how they sound when they’re right She’s heard the harmony singing Can tell when the harmony’s tight But as M C, I do ad Lib My Critic never has a clue The few jokes I tell on the stage She’s never heard, they’re always new

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/11/2012 6:27:00 AM
Charles congrats on your win..David
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Date: 7/10/2012 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's " Big Brother " contest Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2012 8:03:00 PM
This is really great. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/9/2012 2:44:00 PM
congratulations on your well-deserved win! Lori
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Date: 7/9/2012 2:43:00 PM
congratulations on your well-deserved win! Lori
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Date: 7/9/2012 1:23:00 PM
congrats Charles on a wonderful write and win for big brother theme luv..
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Date: 7/9/2012 9:42:00 AM
An interesting take on the contest. Good work. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/8/2012 2:29:00 PM
i like this and i hope your critic enjoys your jokes!
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Date: 7/8/2012 2:39:00 AM
Wonderful to have a critic like that! Nice poem! Terry
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