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The Country Angel

THE COUNTRY ANGEL He came dressed in clean pressed jeans A leather vest and a matching leather hat Though he was someone we'd never seen No one seemed to think much of that He was carrying a beat-up guitar case He asked, "Is this where the Bible study is?" Someone told him, "Yes", downstairs We'll begin around sevenish All were gathered, thirty or so We opened with a word of prayer The man in the leather vest and hat Was kindly just standing there The host asked if he would like to play The guitar he'd brought along He answered quietly, "Yes Sir, if I may" And he began to strum a song It was a familiar song to everyone We all sang every word The man played melodiously Sweeter music was never heard Many souls got saved that night But we never found out his name He had simply vanished from our sight We know not from whence he came We all agreed on this one thing Just as Scriptures bares We had heard an angel sing And entertained him unawares

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Date: 10/30/2018 5:17:00 PM
Curtis this a great poem, To often we look for Angels to show up in white with wings, but God likes to surprise us. I truly enjoyed it. Thanks my friend.
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Date: 2/23/2015 12:20:00 AM
Loved it all the way thru :)
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Date: 2/10/2015 5:56:00 PM
Excellent poem. Your sentence structure with the line breaks is amazing. To use line breaks that work like punctuation is difficult. Don't know if it is talent or luck, but a fun read either way.
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Date: 2/5/2015 11:42:00 AM
This is a lovely write Curtis. I am always courteous and polite, for you never know who you are talking to. One day I met a scruffy old man who I took to be the gardener and he turned out to be The Marquis of Angelsey in North Wales, and a lovely man as well. God Bless. D.
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Date: 2/4/2015 12:56:00 PM
Country or not, we seldom know who is among us. A blessing. (Three times to type this correctly . . . important to me)
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Date: 2/3/2015 10:49:00 PM
A very wonderful piece you have created Curtis! :-)
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 2/4/2015 12:53:00 AM
Thanks, Teddy. Your support is greatly appreciated.
Date: 2/3/2015 9:53:00 PM
Curtis, I really like this poem. It is quite different and yet a great story. I was quite impress and it held my attention.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 2/4/2015 12:55:00 AM
Thank you, Joan. I appreciate you kind remarks.
Date: 2/3/2015 2:05:00 PM
I really liked your poem with the exception of the second verse. You completely lost your rhyme scheme. Perhaps you could change that verse to something like the following. He was carrying a beat-up guitar case He looked like he wanted to play Someone told him, "you came to the right place we'd really like you to stay.
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Date: 2/3/2015 12:52:00 PM
Curtis, very nice; I'm reminded of Wallace Stevens in some aspect of your poem, esp. reminded of his 'The Blue Guitar'
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Date: 2/3/2015 9:44:00 AM
Splended poem.. so expressive and well written !
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Date: 2/3/2015 9:39:00 AM
What an outstanding prose poetry.. I love this... Definitely a 7!
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Date: 2/3/2015 8:13:00 AM
I'm not a 'rater', but you are a writer. What a nice story. Puts one in touch with just how little it takes, on occasion, to bring people together, as well as to themselves; and their finding Faith. But it isn't really "how little it takes", is it? God's interventions loom large and have purpose and never affect just one person. Thanks for you.
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Date: 2/3/2015 7:33:00 AM
I love this, Curtis. Great imagery, easy flow. I give it a seven.
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Date: 2/3/2015 1:09:00 AM
Nice. I like it.
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Date: 2/2/2015 11:54:00 PM
Lovely verse- I agree with Cecilia; this would make a great song, sung by someone like Brian Houston.
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Date: 2/2/2015 9:59:00 PM
This is a delightful fresh and uplifting poem embodying the craft of a true poet. I love it. Neil Stewart McLeod
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Date: 2/2/2015 7:59:00 PM
Curtis, I found your "Country Angel", it's karmic buddy! Please read my "Ballad of the Blue Suede Cafe"! This is too eerie! It's a song too, on Youtube! Check it out! Great job on your work! Tim Collins!
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Date: 2/2/2015 6:54:00 PM
My husband still wears clean, pressed jeans - you have evoked a solid image with your details. I wish I could have heard the mysterious angel sing!
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Date: 2/2/2015 5:49:00 PM
This would also make a lovely country song, excellent write Curtis. Hugs
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Date: 2/2/2015 5:47:00 PM
Well done my good and faithful friend. May the god Lord take a linking to you.
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Date: 2/2/2015 5:34:00 PM
Beautiful poem of an angel and what we need is more music as the sound of God. My compliments
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Date: 2/2/2015 4:35:00 PM
Beautiful write on a mysterious angel and his guitar, inspiring the congregation to give themselves to the Lord. A 7 Blessings Eve
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Date: 4/9/2012 2:04:00 PM
Belated congrats on your win with this one Curtis well dserved xx
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Date: 4/1/2012 1:02:00 PM
I am very happy to send you this congratulations on your well deserved win in Gail's "Touched By An Angel" contest Curtis. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2012 12:15:00 PM
I am so amazed at how God works in the most unimaginable ways...the guitar was probably converted from the angel's harpsichord and the music right from the throne of God!...So proud of this marvelous poem and its success, Curtis...It's almost like an angel wrote it!...Love, Gwendolen
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