The Clown Who Killed Himself

His smile was painted on
His soul was drained of life’s essence
Into the ring he performed
Magical was his smile
He performed to the world
And the world laughed
As he cried inside
For later would come
Bloody hell
And flow it would
The crowds went home
To the comforts of love
The clown stayed on
Tormented in darkness
As the blood flowed
He found his peace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 11/15/2015 11:15:00 AM
Yes that is possible. I'm hoping young Trudea's idealism garners some positive changes.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 12:28:00 PM
LOL So far all he has done is approve dumping 2 billion litres of sewage waste into the St Laurence river in Montreal.LOL http://www.thesuburban.com/opinion/editorial_cartoons/cartoon-sewage-dump/image_9afab3f2-b1b7-56bc-8124-b92ca579443b.html
Date: 11/15/2015 10:00:00 AM
awww....soo very sad :(( ~ a weeping 7~
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 10:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, I will have to find a way to make you smile now!
Date: 12/6/2013 6:37:00 PM
Clowns ware a mask this is so true, and most people think they live in a world of laughter but behind the mask their is a human being whom must have love and laughter in his life. This write is lovely and sad at the same time. i enjoyed seeing behind this clowns mask and wish the ending was happier. cheri
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 10:53:00 AM
Thanks Cherl, I missed the comments on the poem, so its a belated thank-you :) hugs
Date: 4/29/2013 7:12:00 AM
Some clowns freak me out. Probably the result of reading Stephen King. Great poem.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 10:52:00 AM
or....... you could be thinking of the clowns in Ottawa? :)
Date: 4/14/2013 1:27:00 PM
Full of a depth of emotion that is compelling. Lovely write!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/15/2015 10:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Eileen, somehow I missed answering comments on this poem!
Date: 4/14/2013 9:35:00 AM
well done my friend...Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/14/2013 9:36:00 AM
Thank you, however I have to confess, I had some excellent help!!!
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