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The Climb

This is a song by a teenager MILEY CYRUS.I wanted to share with everyone cause it 
really says alot.Please take the time to read it and hear it's words.
It will help you if your down.

   I can almost see it,that dream I'm dreaming but,
there's a voice inside my head saying,You'll never reach it.
Every step I'm taking,every move I make feels,lost with no
direction,my faith is shaking.
But I, I gotta keep trying,gotta keep my head held high.
  There's always gonna be another mountain,
I'm always gonna wanna make it move,always gonna be
an up  hill battle,sometimes I'm gonna have to lose,
ain't about how fast I get there,ain't about what's
waiting on the other side,


   The struggles I'm facing,the chances I'm taking sometimes
might knock me down but,know I'm not breaking.I may not
know it,but these are the moments,I'm gonna remember most,
just gotta keep going.But,I gotta be strong,just keep pushing on cause,


                              SONG DONE BY MILEY CYRUS.

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  1. Date: 7/17/2013 9:05:00 AM
    I've heard it but never actually stopped to listen to the words, a sure heart lift this is, thanks for sharing, ~always, Linda

  1. Date: 3/16/2010 11:24:00 AM
    Not a big Miley Cyrus fan as apparently are you, but the above verse can't be argued and is very inspirational too. I must give credit where credit is due. Thanks for sharing Colleen. Best Wishes Always, Bill

  1. Date: 1/23/2010 2:51:00 AM
    MileyThis sounds like a song you'd here on a country radio station... very good! Have you composed a tune (written or sung?) This shows talent. I know you have made your mother proud with these words. Smiling, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 12/13/2009 4:41:00 AM
    Even if this is from Miley, it is uplifting...Hope to read some of your work as well.....Taz

  1. Date: 12/11/2009 1:31:00 PM
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  1. Date: 12/11/2009 10:34:00 AM
    I was not trying to upset and im sorry you took it that way and i didi read the comments before posting my own. I'm just saying i don't think you should be on the hot poems list if you didn't post a poem but someone's song that isn't yours.

  1. Date: 12/10/2009 11:02:00 AM
    ITs a good song but i don't understand why you've done this with it. Personally i don't think this can be considered a poem. A main stream song shouldn't be allowed to be posted as this is.I'm not trying to upset or offend anyonebut i don't think its okay for you to use miley's song. Honestly if its not yours don't use it. sorry Emily

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 9:22:00 AM
    I'm great thank you, I'm writing a book of poetry to gain total control of ones life, positive thinking! All my early poems are on this subject, I am so glad to feel the change in you, read my poems, I'm sure you will FEEL so inspired, great song! love Simone

  1. Date: 12/6/2009 4:53:00 AM
    This is one of my favorite songs and of course my daughter is the age that she LOVES Miley (Hannah) LOL This is a great reminder, a beautiful "Thought for the Day" type of reminder. I may have to find a way to print this out and hang it on my fridge LOL Thank you for sharing. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 12/5/2009 9:10:00 AM
    My goodness, Colleen, this reminds me so much of a poem I wrote about climbing a mountain to find myself as a teen. Needless to say, I can appreciate these lyrics! Thank you for sharing Miley's song. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/3/2009 7:50:00 PM
    Beautiful song Colleen, Nice to hear your up and smilingKeep climbing. Smile! Sincerely, Love, Moses

  1. Date: 12/3/2009 8:15:00 AM
    Dear Colleen. YOUR Heart is unique A nice Tribute To Miley ALWAYS YOURS...HG SOUP MAIL CALL

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 9:09:00 PM
    U need to read the requirements posted for entry of your poetry for each contest.. Raul Moreno is askking for Esphrakis which if u look on your member page under forms of poetry and click on E it will explain how to write this type of poem for the contest... give it a try... blessings.. luv.. LMB Sweetie

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 8:55:00 PM
    Manifesto if for the new contest The Deposition posted under contests.. try your hand.. Colleen.. and enter.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 5:40:00 PM
    i'm glad you took the time to listen, john

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 4:31:00 PM
    Great words to Miley's song... I used to luv to listen to her Dad sing back years ago....if u want to relate to them thats fine but u have written some beautiful words yourself so u should focus on your own words for encouragement as u climb new mountains every day... thankxxx for sharing and for comments on my poetry also.. blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetie"

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 4:03:00 PM
    Hi Colleen Thank you for the comments. As for your poems, Yoiu write lovely poems and have that special talent. As far as the Prayer. Keep it and say it every day. I do. it''s easyto say it from the heart. It definitely will help you and others you pray it for . God bless you. You are in my prayers. -Robert

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 2:53:00 PM
    get on poetrysoup chat, i need someone to listen to me!

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 9:14:00 AM
    Outstandingly Beautiful and inspiring. Love this presentation of yours. Thanks Convey my love and best wishes to that teenager who has composed it. Brilliant With best wishes, Ravindra

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 1:29:00 AM
    I have heard her sing this one. I really like the chorus. If she wrote it, she is mature beyond her years. There are those battle or climb or the valleys but that is what matures us. Thanks for the comments and I did slice my finger but thank God didn't get any pepper or hot sauce in it and now it is very hard to type now and it has throbbed all night. Sara