The Cleaning Lady's Short Rant

I loathe sifting the vile cat litter and scrubbing the damn tile Now if you’ll excuse me I think I’ll shriek and shout for just awhile!!!

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/30/2011 12:49:00 PM

Natalie, a male friend of mine put the litter pan in a carpeted bedroom. Now, no one can even enter the room and the cat's been gone for over a year but the smell lingers on. This couplet is a riot. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2011 10:26:00 AM

Good morning and congratulations on your win in Susan's "Couplet Challenge" contest Natalie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2011 11:08:00 PM

haha, good one, Natalie, Congrats on your win.

Constance La France

Date: 9/28/2011 9:52:00 PM

I so agree with you about the cat litter, I love my two cats but hate litter duty, best of luck with this fun couplet, and i want to thank you so much for my 5th place win in your Genius or Criminal Contest, I had fun writing that poem for you and I am very honored and proud ~~

Jack Horne

Date: 9/28/2011 5:29:00 PM

LOL, I can visualise this one!! Thanks, Natalie - your contest was great fun : )

Gary Fields

Date: 9/26/2011 4:17:00 AM

We certainly know how to put thing's.. Straight to the point and not too exact.. I like this one...so thought-ful and full of I just Know...isch-ca-duta-MAZING ritual.. smile and keep the write^up^up! your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS o(:-o)'s.... PS; What do you know! I have Adrenal Gland Insufficiency too.....