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The Castle Built on Sand

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The Castle Built on Sand

I built a castle
upon another's foundation

the final note of each song

Looking for where I belonged
soul quenching
the hands upon my breath

of life that has loved,
loved 'til the death
each subtle breath

Breathing your tragedy
within your words
in my heart

'tis love undying
as I exhale 
This castle washed upon the sand......

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  1. Date: 8/21/2013 10:25:00 AM
    - A beautiful and deeply moving poem, Cindy. - Thank you. -Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)