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The Castle Built On Sand

I built a castle upon another's foundation Kissing, Missing the final note of each song Looking for where I belonged searching, soul quenching the hands upon my breath of life that has loved, loved 'til the death each subtle breath Breathing your tragedy within your words in my heart Love.... 'tis love undying as I exhale This castle washed upon the sand......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/21/2013 10:25:00 AM
- A beautiful and deeply moving poem, Cindy. - Thank you. -Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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