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The Bridge

They stand on the bridge in the dreamy moonlight Full of love and happiness, with eyes shining bright One year ago today, they met here one summer night They felt the universe shift, it was love at first sight He gets on bended knee, she lets out a squeal of delight He sweetly says, "marry me and let me be your knight? I promise to honor, cherish and always treat you right You'll be the most beautiful bride ever dressed in white" Before she can say 'yes', she awakes, damn that's not right! She desperately tries to return to dreamland with all her might Is this a premonition that her dreams will finally take flight? She smiles and rereads his text "I request your presence on our bridge tonight" 05/ 04/ 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/12/2013 4:42:00 PM
Rereading this one. A dream come TRUE
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Date: 8/4/2013 1:08:00 AM
rereading this sweet one and waiting for new poetry!! Nice seeing you here!
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Date: 7/10/2013 4:13:00 AM
I'm happy this bridge did not go unused. Unused bridges can collapse under their own weight. They are created to span life's troubled times and are seasoned by the stress we place on them... Great read this morning.... Welcome to my day... Jake
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Date: 6/23/2013 7:28:00 PM
very, very, nice, going to fav's ;}
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Date: 5/27/2013 12:36:00 AM
Oh wow... great monorhyme! I really loved the last few lines... a premonition of good things to come! I've had a premonition before (but it was of someone's death coming soon). Beautiful piece of writing!
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Date: 5/3/2013 12:40:00 PM
An impressive rhymin poem if frm imagination or real life all lovely!
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Date: 4/18/2013 3:37:00 PM
oh good. I love the sweet ending on this one. Nicely done!
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Date: 4/11/2013 3:31:00 PM
love this clever piece
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Date: 4/10/2013 8:38:00 AM
Dropping by to say good morning. I hope all is well.
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Date: 4/9/2013 9:33:00 PM
Oh, i know how hard it is to resit a tex... Cecilia the beining drew me in, awe just like love. it always sounds dreamy, like under the moonlight... love the sweet passion ...Linda
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Date: 4/9/2013 5:39:00 PM
Damn dreams! hahaha! Great twist at the end. Nice work!
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Date: 4/8/2013 7:51:00 AM
Heartwarming & memorable. Just beautiful!
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Date: 4/5/2013 8:39:00 PM
Nice words... and thanks for reading my work...
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Date: 4/5/2013 8:19:00 PM
Ooooooooooh! Happiness, disappointment... excitement! Sure loved the ride this evening. What a lovely piece you've crafted! Always, Laura
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Date: 4/5/2013 7:34:00 PM
This is very clever indeed, we still don't know what happens? Please let us know! Great poem.
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Date: 4/5/2013 2:54:00 PM
Romantic or what !! Very Nice !
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Date: 4/5/2013 1:02:00 PM
WOW!!!!! I LOVE THIS! How absolutely romantic! :) I like the fact that you continued the monorhyme for so long...good one, Cecelia! Hugs!
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