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The Box Spring Bed Rumor....

Somewhere in luisianna, On Saterday Nights... In some Abandoned Mental Hospitial.. Saterday Nights, The doors unlock... In one of the rooms A box spring Bed appears... Sleep there, and sometime in the night you shall be awakened.. An old man, In a white Shirt with words upon it... Don't scream, Or be alarmed, He will ask a question about your life.. Answer correctly and he will give you a photo... Look at this photo, Study it carefully... It will show how you'll die Once you recieve the picture and review it You must leave immediatly... It's Quite a wonder But I must warn you.. If the picture is of the man before you, the one who gave you the picture Running away won't help Neither wil Screaming...

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Date: 4/8/2016 2:42:00 AM
Jake, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/25/2015 10:48:00 PM
Jake, Enjoyed this very much... SKAT
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Date: 5/5/2009 1:07:00 PM
I like this. I want to hear more. Right away my mind jumped to a short story, maybe longer.... I am impressed with the setting too.
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Date: 2/2/2009 3:52:00 PM
This is really good
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Date: 1/24/2009 10:02:00 AM
Wow ~Jese
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Date: 1/21/2009 6:44:00 PM
powerful-is all i can say and somewhat sad-good write-rhonda hero
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