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Though it has been five and twelve years and you are both now tucked safely deep in the unfathomed depths of sub-conscious At times you still invade troubled dreams Oozing cold sweat; wrestling unseen demons Jolting half awake and bolting upright (No-no-no-why-where have you gone) I find it placed conveniently at arm's length A trembling, fumbling hand reaches out to grab hold and blow away memory…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/6/2013 5:17:00 AM
Such profound emotion in this well written piece, Tim. Elaine
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Date: 4/21/2013 11:33:00 AM
Nicely done Tim, congrats,Carl
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Date: 4/20/2013 5:16:00 AM
Oh Toby!! *tear* This is so well done. Congrats on your win! Miss you. Hope your day is good and fresh wind fills your sails! ;) love and hugs Dotty
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Date: 4/19/2013 2:33:00 AM
Congratulations Tim on your awesome win. Always unique, you are~A.O
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Date: 4/19/2013 12:14:00 AM
This is awesome Tim. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 4/18/2013 7:30:00 PM
Tim, Congratulations in Craig's "Empty Tissue Box " contest;-) always~ PD
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Date: 4/18/2013 4:53:00 PM
grief can do that. well written, congratulations.
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Date: 4/18/2013 1:16:00 PM
Clearly put Tim.....congratulations
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Date: 4/17/2013 7:05:00 PM
Lost love cher...Congrad's on Your win, Light & Love
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Date: 4/17/2013 6:00:00 PM
Nice job. Love the images. J
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Date: 4/15/2013 2:59:00 AM
Way to place me into the scene Tim! I love how the title and content help each other to create a bigger picture, and add more clarity to your meaning. I find cremation somewhat unsettling though. My mom says she'd rather be cremated and let go into a place where she loved to be... rather then held onto for years to come. Good luck on the contest!
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Date: 4/13/2013 2:06:00 PM
Tim, good luck in the contest, an excellent write all the way! Much Love and respect ~*~ SKAT
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Date: 4/13/2013 8:37:00 AM
Tim You know I am with you and you with me. I'd love to think they are together as well. love, Kathy
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Date: 4/13/2013 6:56:00 AM
Awesome entry Tim...Donna
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Date: 4/13/2013 5:06:00 AM
good luck in the contest I really enjoyed your poem :) thanks for stopping by and reading some of mine it was muc appreciated love Jayne
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Date: 4/13/2013 5:07:00 AM
much appreciated lol :)
Date: 4/12/2013 6:53:00 PM
wow, what a powerful poem. Oh gosh, Ilene down here said that too. I am noticing everywhere I go, she is saying stuff similar to what I want to say. I think she and I sure think a lot the same. Anyway, I love this. Is there some box contest going on? Yours is second one I have seen since I just got here.
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Date: 4/12/2013 5:40:00 PM
very powerful and poignant...
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Date: 4/12/2013 3:19:00 PM
I find it sad. But well expressed. Terry xo
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Date: 4/12/2013 12:09:00 PM
very sad ~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/12/2013 10:52:00 AM
Wow..........intense and gripping. Leaves one in the cold sweat of the nightmare/dreamland of grief.
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