The Bluest Sky

I search for sparrrows in bluest sky, and toss my heartache into the wind. But from the blue, to my dismay, the cold wind blows it back again. Then from Heaven's breath, my wide eyes see a sparrow and a friend, and a voice calls out from bluest sky, "forgive and make amends".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 8/1/2012 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "#192" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2012 12:42:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS,,, with your awesome win...xox~PD
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Date: 7/29/2012 10:25:00 PM
RHONDA..I love YOUR AWESOME WIN..., a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS...GOODNIGHT;-) PD
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Date: 7/29/2012 7:03:00 PM
Congrats. on you 1st place winner. A wonderful msg. enclosed within Anne
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Date: 7/29/2012 1:39:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win - JH
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Date: 7/29/2012 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations Rhonda, on a wonderful write and 1st place win. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 7/29/2012 6:48:00 AM
I guess this means don't bring your petitions b4 heaven until your own issues are dealt with...this is a great image to convey the spiritual message...Very amazed at its beauty! gwendolen
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Date: 7/28/2012 4:55:00 PM
congrats on your first place finish Rhonda
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Date: 7/28/2012 2:47:00 PM
Not only a beautiful poem in lovely description, but a wonderful message to hold! Perfectly done, Rhonda!
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Date: 7/28/2012 1:28:00 PM
congrats!!! keep up the good wook! :)
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Date: 7/28/2012 1:07:00 PM
Rhonda congrats on another win, your pen is flowing very nicely here,,,David
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Date: 7/28/2012 1:07:00 PM
Great poem!
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Date: 7/26/2012 9:30:00 AM
a powerful piece Rhonda.. the last line serves us all so well luv.. forgiveness is the start of blessings galore.. luv this one..
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Date: 7/25/2012 4:50:00 PM
Wonderful life lesson on forgiveness, Rhonda...a true gem - Tim
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Date: 7/24/2012 11:25:00 PM
Cute poem wid so much of depth
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Date: 7/24/2012 7:11:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem, Rhonda! I enjoyed reading it very much. Love, Kim
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Date: 7/24/2012 5:55:00 PM
what a lovely message inside this little gem, Rhonda. Much enjoyed!
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Date: 7/24/2012 3:29:00 PM
This is such a true write my friend! I believe what you have said wholeheartedly! I really enjoyed what you have written! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/24/2012 11:07:00 AM
Rhonda my friend...beautiful again!!!! :) -oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/24/2012 10:59:00 AM
This is a beautiful piece, Rhonda. I am going to save it on my favorites list and show it to my wife...she will LOVE it!
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Date: 7/24/2012 9:01:00 AM
not only is this dreamy, it's heavenly...enjoyed the flow and content of the work, rhonda.. well woven message of love and forgiveness!... :) huggs!
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