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The Black Bird

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The Black Bird

Sitting on
My front porch
There was a black bird
eating blackberries and toast

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  1. Date: 8/27/2013 2:10:00 PM
    I can't believe you were so young when you wrote these, well I can tell you you were and are very talented poet

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 9/1/2013 2:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aw, thank you! I'm trying to get there. ;)
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 11:52:00 PM
    Your talent has showed from an early age. All the poems I have posted have been written since October 2012. Here I am at 52 finally developing the skills to express myself through writing. I guess I am a slow starter.

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 6/12/2013 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aww thank you! Better than never! And who knows? Maybe back then you DID have the talent, it just took you now to find it. :D Everyone on here is so extremely talented. :)
  1. Date: 6/4/2013 11:35:00 AM
    I like to see you posting more, Caleah! A nice image in this one... it has the feel of haiku for me. An objective un-opinionated standpoint of the writer... there is beauty in simple observations of life.

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 6/4/2013 1:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Haha I was just having a field day when I found my old poetry! I'm like, "Post, post" These were basically written when I was 10-11 years old. So nice to know I was a bit talented back then. ;)Thanks so much it really is quite beautiful.