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The Birds Begin

Despite the black, the birds begin
To call the light unto the day,
Persistent songs remind the Sun
To send the stars upon their way.

There's hope in this which I admire:
The birds trust what they're yet to see,
I know I trust you just the same,
And always will, unfailingly.

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  1. Date: 5/28/2012 12:26:00 PM
    Ahhh! the wisdom of the birds... the behaviour of creatures rises above the duplicity of man, and helps us understand the nature of trust. A beautiful piece with a perfect rolling cadence and subtle rhyming. :)

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 2:22:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your work..It speaks of your faith..Sara

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 1:49:00 PM
    Sorry about the wrong name on my comment, was reading Sara's poem before yours, but I ment every word I wrote and it was for your poem.. Sorry once more! oxoxo always Laila

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 1:46:00 PM
    Beautiful written, Sara! excellent work, enjoy reading your poetry! There is always hope for the hopeful! oxoxo always Laila

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 1:43:00 PM
    Very nice rhythm, alliteration, and rhyme...and a pleasing, positive message. Good work!

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 12:15:00 PM
    Beautiful cadence and rhyming. A lovely poem of trust and resignation. Well done, Annie! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 11:22:00 AM
    Smile ˜ Now, this is some beautiful Poetry I would surely say, my dear sweeet beautiful Annie ˜ "And, HIS BEAUTY, smiled at everyone and said, 'I have not found such great faith....'" * Beautiful ˜ My love, Always, John!:) ˜