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The Big Bad Wolf

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The Big Bad Wolf

Time is going by
Hell is breaking loose
Everybody is running, running, jumping, paralleling by

Bright eyes surround you, they have never, always, sometimes, been waiting
If the stars blink out, the sun burns out, the moon falls down
Great savta's all around, will have never been creating

Bright, bright, bright, living it up
All the blessings and curses of the universes
Dished out in one golden cup

Wish, wish, faith, hope, pray upon a star
Often someone will hear
Like an Angel, They always know where you are
Fall away, and pray that you can hold all you hold dear

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  1. Date: 9/9/2012 4:12:00 PM
    Stellar! I loved the way of rhyming in the first three stanzas (1st line with 3rd) then you decided to rhyme the fourth stanza in a differentway. It's not just an acrostic piece. Great job. Love, Khalid.

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 5:18:00 AM
    Love this! You've done your Acrostic very well!