Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

The Bee

Ann Anderson Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled The Bee which was written by poet Ann Anderson. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Ann Anderson

Best Ann Anderson Poems

+ Fav Poet

The Bee

Lavenders aroma calls
The humble bumble,
Honey awaits all.

Copyright © Ann Anderson

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 12/7/2008 10:32:00 AM
    'humble bumble, honey,' ...marvelous assonance! Lovely flow and word selections. BRAVO Ann! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 11/17/2008 5:32:00 AM
    There's an innocence to this read that makes it as sweet as the honey itself. The flow is smooth and tone zperfect for the form and clarity. Michael

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 4:17:00 PM
    Thank you for allowing me to smile with this one. The rhyme in the second line gives your poem a lighthearted feel. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 3:14:00 PM
    Good one..touch of humor..BG

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 1:53:00 PM
    Adorable picture this one paints. Love the humble bumble line. Cute, cute, cute. Love Christie

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 1:52:00 PM
    Cute and sweet little Haiku! Nicely done! :) Carrie

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 1:15:00 PM
    This is a very sweetly written Haiku. Great job.

  1. Date: 11/12/2008 12:20:00 PM
    I would take the s off of lavender but that's just me. Good!