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The Beast Within

You once made my heart beat, but now you have created a beast, a carnivore blood thirsty beast, monster as the killers from the east. You reaped my heart out mercilessly, made it bleed out so profusely, made a mark that is scared deeply, you are a monster but always a beauty. Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder, but excruciating pain lie in the beholder, a grim ill be in you life as a reaper, to taker you heart out cold but colder. Now i understand why we make love, but we never actually fall in love, a night pleasure in words a beast, you have created within the beast.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/3/2012 5:39:00 PM
I really feel this one, I going through something similar right now and the quote of the east send shivers down my spine. Great writing. Jon
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Jermaine Kirimi
Date: 7/5/2012 2:18:00 AM
Thanks i went through the same as well.its from the heart
Date: 6/30/2012 3:05:00 AM
Powerful words, your poem moved me, made me think each time I read it. Fantastic work.
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