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The Barley Wire Octopus

derelict gypsies in the shade speak with crows across the way. through the barley field and the corn spread the tenacles that were forlorned. telephone wires that have no shape stretching out so none escape. some said that it was the cross, some followed the lines and were lost.

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Date: 10/27/2011 1:17:00 AM
I like how you used the words choka inside your choka poem! And the arms crossed was a cool line!
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